Once a Spring Breath

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Sonny Roper

October 14, 1943 to August 29, 2018

Dapple, broken rainbow upon my heart, A light within and existential angst. Once a spring breath that danced, now falls apart. Dapple, broken rainbow upon my heart, A moment of you captured in my art. Hours move forth, you fade away, with much angst. Dapple, broken rainbow upon my heart, A light within and existential angst. 8/29/2022

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/5/2022 6:56:00 PM

Eve, this is beautiful and so deeply heartfelt sorrow. I am sorry for your deep loss. God bless you. Hugs from afar my friend. <3 <3 <3

Michael Tor

Date: 9/1/2022 3:32:00 AM

Heartfelt write Eve so sorry for your loss. Hope you are well...

Eve Roper
Date: 9/2/2022 7:13:00 PM

Thank you, Michael. Many blessings your way my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2022 9:48:00 AM

- Lovely written, Eve - Admire the painting - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 9/2/2022 7:14:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Many blessings your way my friend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/29/2022 10:51:00 PM

I still has his rosary. Sad but lovely poem.

Eve Roper
Date: 8/30/2022 9:14:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, he loved making them.

Andy Chunn

Date: 8/29/2022 9:17:00 PM

Your words capture the magnitude of your loss. You present him so beautifully with your art. A moving poem that one feels when they read. So sorry for your loss.

Eve Roper
Date: 8/29/2022 10:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andy, the hardest part is as the years go by, we lose a little of them. Blessings to you