On Your Success

I am happy for your victory
The road was rough and crooked
Like the journey in a devilish story 
So much energy and time hooked. 
My heart prayed for you,a grace
For a complete and a victorious race.

Painful, I was not there.
Happy, to feel the euphoria.
The smiling face you'd wear
It is a good start from here.
More and more on your path
Sweetness of a repose after a good bath.

For your zest and unceasing sweat
The pain and the stress
Incomparable to the reward of every comment
The pull of pool of the press
Gathered to celebrate you
For in all, you are due.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 25, 2013 at 4:18 AM
- A nice poem to read! Thank you! - Have a wonderful Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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