On Your Birthday

To you "the special one" I pray:
May bliss from heaven light 
your way,
With joyful returns of the day,
Hear the shout: hip-hip-hip! 
hurray!
To you today on your birthday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 9:56 AM
a sweet write for a birthday, cute one, enjoyed,,.p.d.
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November 1, 2010 at 9:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Albert. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 31, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative birthday theme.. hope u check out the contests offered to new members on site ..good luck with luv..
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October 31, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Nice feelings expressed on the birthday, Albert
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October 31, 2010 at 5:19 AM
GOOD birthday poem
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