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On Valentine's Night

(16/02/2012)

My poetic pill
No need to clothe our bodies
Here, in my arms still

Today is our day
Dance me your magical tricks
Take my sighs away

Migled hearts in flare
Regale me my burning moans
As our desires burn

Inspired by: Olajide Adelana
Story of Valentine Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2012 9:53:00 AM

Thanks So much for your comments at my pages Dinda.Waiting for a new poem.I think this avatar has become old now.Time to change;)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/25/2012 3:32:00 PM

I like "poetic pill" great phrase. good luck in the contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 8:42:00 AM

I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Dinda. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 2/20/2012 10:31:00 AM

Waiting for a new one.....

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/20/2012 9:17:00 AM

Dinda,...are you saying that I am unpredictable or that I always go against the grain?...ha ha ha. There used to be a poet who sponsored a contest called Beautiful Birds. Everyone wrote a exotic fancy birds..I found it to be sooo boring..I wrote of my favorite cartoon birds..Daffy Duck, Tweedy Bird..the birds that made me laugh are the most beautiful birds of all!! Right?...ha ha. Hugs..thanks for stopping by...Let's have coffee together soon...throw me a coffee poem of yours...lol.Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/20/2012 8:44:00 AM

subtle forepay of love and passion so well- scribed.. breathless, dinda.. sure winner.. :) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/19/2012 9:21:00 AM

Ps...love the line-"-take my sighs away"..like an antidote for a stressful day...nice!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/19/2012 9:20:00 AM

Sizzle sizzle, hot!! Love your intensity of expressions here, Dinda. Classy and playful BOTH!! This will be a fun contest to read from the winner's circle. I am not very good about writing of love...I sure enjoy reading the other poets' work though. Have a great Sunday! It's like Spring in the middle of winter here so I won't be on the Soup for very long! Gwendolen

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/17/2012 3:30:00 PM

The steam rises and clouds my vision! A hot little number for the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 8:52:00 AM

Taking a look at this one again and keeping my fingers crossed for you in the contest!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/17/2012 8:29:00 AM

Wonderful Senryu of en cashing love of heart without leaving any chance by surrendering even by cool burning hearts in total. Really enjoyed your power write. Wish you all the best in the contest. Thanks for your uplifting comment , on my write, loved bl