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On Top of the World

one more sunless day. . . . 
snow-white furry creatures are
on top of the world!

For Skat's
TOP OF THE WORLD ~ HAIKU~ Poetry Contest

naturehaiku

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:10:00 PM

lol i need another one of these haiku. skat

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:44:00 AM

wow Andrea, reading this again, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 8:09:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on a brilliant win for this impressive Haiku so vibrant with imagery luv..

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/16/2011 7:11:00 AM

Great work,Andrea.Congratulations on your big win!

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:47:00 AM

congrats in my contest..~LUV*SKAT

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/14/2011 3:37:00 PM

Moonlight and magnolias. Sunlight in your hair. :) That's Jimmy Buffet. A sunless day made me go that way. Sometimes the road we take is open. I was thinking about the midnight sun. wwwwhhhh. :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/13/2011 1:44:00 PM

What are the snow-white furry creatures? polar bears? why not say that if so? [[yes Andie as to sadly being a judgement of the sound of the cows [I had to pad what I wanted to write to get to Charles 5/7/5 here is my revision removing the unnecessary words [gold leaves cling as snow mounds on the maple… cattle low]

Mathias Yakubu

Date: 11/13/2011 10:39:00 AM

Nice one Andrea..about your ''winter poem'' what i mean by imagining is that am having a pictorial view of the poem you understand....

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/12/2011 3:12:00 PM

My narrow mindedness didn't allow me to see the full colours of this inspired haiku....now it has even more meaning....btw...don't ya just hate anorexia nervosa? Ugh...we'd still be enjoying her stuff if she'd only had better self esteeem...she was gorgeous. Luv, Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/12/2011 2:50:00 PM

awwwww.....makes me wanna hug a big white cuddly polar bear......nice. Gwendolen...I've got no good ideas for this contest except an old tune in my head from Karen Carpenter....I'm on the top of the world a lookin..down on creation and the only explanation I can find...is the love that I've found ever since you've been around...Your loves put me on the Top of the World....Remember this one, Andrea...

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/11/2011 9:45:00 PM

Nice 5 7 5 hsiku - but I think you should have put "and" instead of "yet". I hope you and yours are well. Thanksgiving is coming up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

Date: 11/11/2011 3:05:00 PM

I see the world as an igloo in this one - don't quite know why. I suppose that is the charm of Haiku. Luck in the contest. LOve, daver

Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2011 1:42:00 PM

Lovely visuals, my friend. I'm slowly getting to understand what haiku is all about, but you've obviously mastered it