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On This Valentine

I don’t know if it's considered a bad sign To be another more year alone on valentine Without your sweet heart, without your lover You sit alone on this day remember and suffer Remember her gentle touch and warm embrace Remember her loving eyes and beautiful face Remember the sound of her laughter and her pretty smile Though now it’s all over, you still think of her all the while (I wish she was still mine And with me on this valentine) Remember that you didn’t even get to say goodbye Remember how badly then you wanted to die Remember how like a river flowed the tears But you can’t remember when….. You stopped counting the years Now you are asked and sobbing: fine But one more year alone on valentine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/26/2015 11:18:00 PM
so sad this sweet valentine is. I enjoyed reading this one tonight.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 2/27/2015 2:26:00 AM
Thank you Andrea so much, happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 2/13/2015 3:55:00 AM
- So sad from your heart, Mohamed - I wish you a sweet Valentine's Day and a beautiful weekend!- // Anne-Lise :)
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 2/15/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne so much, glad you liked it :)
Date: 2/7/2015 3:09:00 AM
touching deeply beautiful piece mohamed i can relate bless you
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 2/7/2015 3:30:00 AM
Thank you liam so much, glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/26/2015 5:32:00 PM
Sad and beautiful, you must read Arthur Vasos "The town of Nowhere" this seems where all sad poets go.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/26/2015 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Etienne so much, I have just read it and yes, it seems like so
Date: 1/26/2015 2:36:00 PM
The weight of your words unbalances the scales of average as loneliness sinks to new depths approaching despair. A romantic soul is by nature doomed to feel every spark of love surrounding it, hoping of ignite a flame. Emile. #7
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/26/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Emile so much and i think you understand me so well, glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/26/2015 12:33:00 PM
Very sad, but there are other valentines waiting to be found, new love abounds. I really enjoyed your poem
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 1/26/2015 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Timothy so much, very happy you liked it and i hope so

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