Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

On This Valentine

I don’t know if it's considered a bad sign
To be another more year alone on valentine
Without your sweet heart, without your lover
You sit alone on this day remember and suffer 

Remember her gentle touch and warm embrace 
Remember her loving eyes and beautiful face
Remember the sound of her laughter and her pretty smile 
Though now it’s all over, you still think of her all the while 
(I wish she was still mine 
And with me on this valentine) 

Remember that you didn’t even get to say goodbye 
Remember how badly then you wanted to die 
Remember how like a river flowed the tears
But you can’t remember when…..
You stopped counting the years
Now you are asked and sobbing: fine 
But one more year alone on valentine

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Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2015 at 11:18 PM so sad this sweet valentine is. I enjoyed reading this one tonight. Mohamed Adel February 27, 2015 at 2:26 AM Thank you Andrea so much, happy you enjoyed it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2015 at 3:55 AM - So sad from your heart, Mohamed - I wish you a sweet Valentine's Day and a beautiful weekend!- // Anne-Lise :) Mohamed Adel February 15, 2015 at 8:50 AM Thank you Anne so much, glad you liked it :)

Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 3:09 AM touching deeply beautiful piece mohamed i can relate bless you Mohamed Adel February 7, 2015 at 3:30 AM Thank you liam so much, glad you liked it :)

Etienne Lariviere January 26, 2015 at 5:32 PM Sad and beautiful, you must read Arthur Vasos "The town of Nowhere" this seems where all sad poets go. Mohamed Adel January 26, 2015 at 6:18 PM Thank you Etienne so much, I have just read it and yes, it seems like so

Emile Pinet January 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM The weight of your words unbalances the scales of average as loneliness sinks to new depths approaching despair. A romantic soul is by nature doomed to feel every spark of love surrounding it, hoping of ignite a flame. Emile. #7 Mohamed Adel January 26, 2015 at 4:32 PM Thank you Emile so much and i think you understand me so well, glad you liked it :)

Timothy Emmons January 26, 2015 at 12:33 PM Very sad, but there are other valentines waiting to be found, new love abounds. I really enjoyed your poem Mohamed Adel January 26, 2015 at 1:55 PM Thank you Timothy so much, very happy you liked it and i hope so