On the Way To the Spacific

I’m sitting here inside my daddy’s car.
I sure hope that the ocean is not far.

My mom and dad are making such a fuss.
Maybe cause there’s someone new with us.

It’s someone on my Daddy’s side who came
to see us. Dang it! I forgot her name!

I’ll listen close. Her name they’re bound to say.
Just what’s that mean “on Dad’s side” anyway?

Dad’s side of what? And how long will it be
till that Spacific Ocean we will see?

We couldn’t see it last time cause of rain.
Was it Spacific? Oh, my mixed up brain!

Mom made some salty stuff for us to eat.
it’s cereal – not sweet- yet it’s a TREAT!

It’s called Chex Mix. I keep trying to choose
the curly nuts in it. (Mom says cashews!)

They’re better than plain peanuts. What a taste!
I’ll eat it all, so it won’t go to waste.

We’re all squeezed in back here, but I am by
the window, happy for this sunny day!

But suddenly are clouds, and without a sound,
when the rain pours down, Daddy turns around.

We’re heading home. I hate the sudden bang
of thunder. We won’t see Spacific! DANG!


June 27, 2017 for Brenda Chiri's 'Three year olds thoughts' Contest

*This is one of my few actual memories from when I was three years old, but I used poetic license to fill in the gaps!
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Mccall Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 5:51 PM
What a cute little poem Andrea, I love the word play on the spacific ocean that's too bad you didn't get to see it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 8:53 PM
I like the water I find it relaxing. I felt like i was there.Enjoyed your poetry.
Anish Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 12:32 PM
I have seen the Paciific My late father drove all away across th country and we had a good time. I know you are not related to the Actress Marlene Dietrich but there is a baseball player - I think for the Mets named Dietrich. any knowledge of this? Matthew Anish
Daniel Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Ha ha! Andrea, no wonder this sounds original, beautifully presented Spacific:) I loved this one, sure to win:)
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 10:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
Smith Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 4:16 PM
haha...I can so picture this
Muideen Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Love this excellently penned poem. You are really good at what you do.
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Great couplets and love the humour here Andrea and dad's bit on the side made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Aww ..Rained out again!....Wonderful write Andrea
Turner Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:17 PM
I have no memory of being three. My first memories were at the age of 4. Very cute poem, Andrea. We used to ride our bikes out to the rice fields. The farmers always had their rice wells pumping ice cold water, watering the rice and there was always a washed out place where it hit the ground. That water was so cold, it would turn your lips blue. Now that's what i call fun on a hot summer day:)
Smith Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Reminds me of Edith Ann (Lilly Tomlin on Laugh In) Great entry Andrea, best wishes...
Cozart Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:10 PM
"Spacific" is beyond cute.
Green Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:57 PM
This was cute Andrea. I love the "Spacific" ocean...that's opposite from the Clantic, right? :)
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