On the Verge

pastel spring's coming
ushered in by fresh fragrance
lemon blooms sunning

posh pink flowers peep
pearl snowdrops left with the clouds
blue roses still sleep

buttercups, lilacs
green ivy resumes its creep
daffodil comebacks

pansies rich and bold
flutter with peach peonies
pink sun marigolds

beautifulcolorflowergreennaturehaiku

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Rowena Velasco

July 29, 2025 at 4:46 AM

Love the fresh, soft vibes of spring you captured here! The colors and scents almost jump off the page—makes me want to step outside and smell the flowers. Such a sweet, calming read.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 29, 2025 at 7:57 PM

So happy that you enjoyed this poem, Rowena. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

Hilda Greenhough

March 27, 2025 at 4:39 PM

I liked these colorful flowers of spring. I'm happy reading your poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 27, 2025 at 6:25 PM

I am so delighted that you enjoyed this, Hilda. Thank you. :)

Sara Kendrick

March 25, 2025 at 3:09 PM

So many niceties about spring flowers. They are so beautiful. I go out and come back sneezing. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 25, 2025 at 8:06 PM

Oh, I feel for you! Allergies can be rough. Thank you for your lovely comments. Best wishes.

Ink Empress

March 20, 2025 at 8:50 AM

Dear evelyn, its so good to read you after such a long time! And I absolutely love the way youv painted imagery using also alliterations in such an eloquent manner! The elegant way you write is always so beautiful and artistic for the heart and soul of readers! I love everything about this and i saw through your picturesque details! A fave this is! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 20, 2025 at 5:09 PM

Thank you very much for your joy inspiring words, dear Ink. It's so wonderful to hear from you again. I am honored by your kind remarks, and also by your fave. Many blessings. :)