On the Tip of My Tongue

Truth is hung on the tip of my tongue; It speaks the fear that I may die young Before I know the depth of my Soul- And all poems I've yet begun! What will we find on the Other Side: A place of Love or land of Lies; A Realm of tears in Sorrow cries; Or a World of Woe in heavy sighs?

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/26/2013 8:25:00 AM

Chan my dear friend You always keep me guessing what I will find in your poetry. But you never disappoint me. I like to see the different styles and feelings you put in each one. This is another one that touches the readers heart. My poem Sensitivity and Drinking is fictional. Thanks for the concerned comment. Love and hugs Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/27/2013 6:19:00 AM

Thanks, Sweet Pea <3

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/14/2013 11:54:00 AM

Another superbly written piece of damn fine poetry from you ~ Karen

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/14/2013 1:40:00 PM

You make me smile every single day. Much love to you, my friend <3