On the Streets of New York

More people trudge on every block
Than live in many towns,
Their faces blank or manifesting
Current ups or downs.

I check out what they’re wearing
And the way they stroll or strut.
Deciding which are tourists
Doesn’t take much thinking, but…

I wonder how it feels for someone
From a tiny place
Confronted with more humans than
They’ve ever had to face.

Are they excited by the crowds
They knew that they would find
Or aching for the peace and quiet
That they left behind?

My guess is that the frenzy
Of New York sets them aflame,
But they’re relieved when they return,
At last, from whence they came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Johnson Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Nice place to visit for some I guess. :) You are such a New Yorker ilene. But, also, you do travel alot. :)
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Ha-ha! Enjoyed this one. All 4 of my kids live in NY. (I'm from Chicago, still in Chicago, with a hitch in Israel in the middle)...Of course, NY IS the Jewish place to be---but I've managed to resist so far...Anyway, thanks for the perspective! Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Ha-ha! Enjoyed this one. All 4 of my kids live in NY. (I'm from Chicago, still in Chicago, with a hitch in Israel in the middle)...Of course, NY IS the Jewish place to be---but I've managed to resist so far...Anyway, thanks for the perspective! Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
Turner Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Been there, done that, No thanks. I do love the rhyme, Ilene, just not the crowds. Happy Mother's day!
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 3:11 AM
Fabulous description and yes I am one of those who like to go away but am relieved when we get back to our peaceful little Island, would love to visit NYC have friends visit they say its amazing:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 2:45 AM
I moved from a busy city 25 years ago(no regrets) don't do crowds' anymore. That said I'd love to go to NYC for a few days, my daughters been and loved it. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:16 PM
I can really relate to this one, Ilene! I visit NYC often from California, as my sons have lived there for years. It can be daunting at first with all those crowds...I am always relieved when I get back home...I can only take the noise and craziness for so long! Guess I’m just getting older! ;)
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