John Anderson Poet Senryu

On the slippery slope

hear me, see me, slip
down the s
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                             y dip slide
embracing the fall

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Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2025 at 5:19 PM Ooh can feel the angst here…the pull of the foot…knowing you’re going down down down…sadly embracing the fall! John Anderson June 10, 2025 at 5:24 PM Thanks for the feedback, Cheers and Best Wishes

Jan Allison June 9, 2025 at 10:15 AM Excellent ink... but I hope no bones get broken John!! hugs jan xx John Anderson June 10, 2025 at 5:24 PM Yeah, thanks a lot! John Anderson June 10, 2025 at 5:24 PM Yeah, thanks a lot!