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On the slippery slope

hear me, see me, slip down the s l i p p e r y dip slide embracing the fall

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Date: 6/10/2025 5:19:00 PM
Ooh can feel the angst here…the pull of the foot…knowing you’re going down down down…sadly embracing the fall!
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John Anderson
Date: 6/10/2025 5:24:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback, Cheers and Best Wishes
Date: 6/9/2025 10:15:00 AM
Excellent ink... but I hope no bones get broken John!! hugs jan xx
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John Anderson
Date: 6/10/2025 5:24:00 PM
Yeah, thanks a lot!
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John Anderson
Date: 6/10/2025 5:24:00 PM
Yeah, thanks a lot!

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