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On the Shore

On the shore her little feet stand Fondly indeed on the beach's sand On the ocean waves her nectar heart trust Little did she know whether she must Dampened sand beneath as she weeps with pain As the sea flapped dragon slays her castle again. On the ocean waves her broken heart burst Wondering how the stray sea could be so unjust Stronger was her dream than the nightmare that struck Determined she was, leaving her foes awe-struck Carved her Castle tower yet again. Little architect's splendid castle is up again. On the shore her little feet stand Firmly this time on the beach's sand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/19/2016 10:56:00 PM
ria, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:41:00 PM
Ria, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:13:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Ria. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 10:45:00 AM
nice write Ria,your words stand firm
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Date: 8/6/2012 1:48:00 PM
Ria, congrats on your win. - Lovely written and good rhyme. - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Ria Vij
Date: 8/7/2012 5:46:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/5/2012 10:09:00 AM
A love how this lovely poem flows, Ria! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:47:00 AM
Thank you so much. glad to know you liked it
Date: 8/3/2012 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations Ria xx
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Ria Vij
Date: 8/7/2012 5:48:00 AM
Thank you so much. :)

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