On the Rocks

ON THE ROCKS

Moments spent as one
Will forever be nostalgia
In my heart that feels so crumbled
Longing to be in utopia 

Was it a kismet that we met
Fate gave you to me
Odds made you so close to me
But Trammel took you away from me

Then You're finally gone
There's nothing we can do 
Are the words that stabs my heart
Heart still weeping in deep woe

Whence this gonna cease
This ardor that I seized
I demand to find an ease
Or I shall cease to exist 


@Copyright MELINE NGO    SEPTEMBER 15, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/23/2015 11:52:00 AM
Hi Meline , I find your poem so interesting! ... You have a talent and keep on nurturing it. You can count on to many poets here in PoetrySoup.. they are lovely people who'll be there to help you as you go on with your journey in writing,,, Please feel free to comment on others' poem and they'll comment back to you. Spread the love! Shine on !!! :O)) Welcome to Poetry Soup girlfriend :O) __AiyahDT
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Date: 9/23/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Aiyah.
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