On the Rocks

Collecting sandstones

To refill love thrown

Rocks pile---nights alone.




Just Ten Words Contest
Submited by Ashley Conte
dated 8 April 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Very impressive!!. So much conveyed in 10 words.. Arlene..
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:07 AM
wow!! .. feels like I'm on the rocks.. lol... Nice take in 10 words poem, Ashley!!! Big Congratz!! ;))
Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 1:11 AM
brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, ashley
A  Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Ashley, lovely win. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 4:28 PM
a very interesting take on the theme. Congrats. I am enjoying seeing these winners.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Nice poem , hidden tones of sadness ,, congrats Ashley ! Great win !
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:21 PM
- A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, Ashley !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Love this poem...and the meaning behind it. // congrats on win. // paul
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April 13, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful.... congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena
Aldea Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 10:38 PM
a lovely poem Ashley such mesmerizing... thanks for sharing ......regards Cheryl
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