- On the Right Side of the Moon -

Loving you is easy as the heart sings into your heaven 
Come kiss me sugar before the snow melts

Stunning visions before the mirrors a flame sparks
As two white doves in eternal faithfulness weld us together 

Standing an adoring torch within a breathtaking ray of sunlight 
Dreams that were answered, within soft tenderness beauty and love

Always when you enter number one smiles 
Love's paradise ruby wine flows warm 

I will forever find you interesting sweet dreams 
as you make me forget everything that lies behind

Many moons searching distant horizons 
Coming out slowly from the light my dear

As I stared into the stars thoughts within you entered
Brilliant beauty a miracle dawns new horizons  
 
Darling captivating your precious light holds me 
Each time seeing you is like I have known you a lifetime beyond anything 

We travel down the starlit path only for eternity
Heaven's whisper creating our future and dreams






 

A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid
24.02.2016
(unrhymed couplets)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 10:46 AM
a collab at its finest, liam.. huggs
Kariuki Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 6:21 AM
What an amazing poem. i love it
Haikutwinkle Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Captivating couplets
Petersen Potter Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Chircop Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Very very romantic.
Andresen Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 2:49 PM
- This gem I know very well, a pleasure to write with you dear friend Liam - a beautiful poem that belongs to my heart - Best wishes for you and your loved ones :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Absolutely beautiful breathtaking imagery Anne Lise and Liam I do love your wonderful collaborations:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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