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On the Pier

On The Pier Blue waters thrill us so, fish flop upon the lake, beauty is never fake, soft glows the day Breeze filtering the hours waters glimmer and shine promises are on line cool waves lap on Sunset approaches soon the pier ceding to dark as light loses it's spark waters caress Robert J. Lindley, 07-09-2014 Contest Sponsor- nette onclaud On The Pier Contest , here’s another exciting form poetry called the abhanga: it is a Marathi form, (Marathi being one of the languages of India) which has four lines, with syllable counts of 6, 6, 6, 4, with lines 2 and 3 rhyming…\.

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Date: 7/15/2014 5:14:00 AM
And back again with big congrats Robert! Great poem wid great win!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thanks much my friend!!!
Date: 7/14/2014 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on a beautimous win, Robert! Hugs.. Arlene
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:25:00 PM
Thank you Arlene!!!!
Date: 7/14/2014 2:48:00 PM
Lovely and tranquil, Robert. Congratulations.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:25:00 PM
Thanks Faye. It was a great joy to write and brought memories of the blue lake I swam and fished at long ago!
Date: 7/14/2014 2:41:00 PM
the fading spark gives a quiet feel to this remarkable abhanga,robert.....this deserves a fine place in my contest... sweet congrats and huggs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thank you nette. I enjoyed writing in your contest!!!
Date: 7/14/2014 12:09:00 PM
dropping by with my 'Jan' hat on not as jadazzle this time - a worthy winner:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend....As always , your comments greatly appreciated..
Date: 7/11/2014 12:16:00 AM
SO nicely done, Robert. I really like this one.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/15/2014 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!!
Date: 7/10/2014 5:07:00 PM
wonderful picture you painted. good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/10/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thanks my friend!!!
Date: 7/10/2014 1:31:00 PM
Extreme beauty perfectly painted in this one Robert ! Gl in contest!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/10/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thank you my friend!!!

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