Randy Freie Poet Rhyme

On the Patio With My Daddio

Chillin on the patio me and my Daddio 
Jammin on the radio on my Bro's stereo
Then came a loco girl from Cocomo
She wore a thin muumuu doing quite a show

The music got too too loud oh don't you know
Then the Popo made a sudden cameo
They said oh no the radio had to go
Or it was bye bye for me and my Daddio

So it was bye bye radio on the patio
Then the muumuu went away very slow
Since there was just no no other place to go
The party on the low low on the kitchen flo

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Deb M July 20, 2023 at 4:50 AM What a fun poem Randy…l loved it! Debx Deb M July 20, 2023 at 10:55 PM Oh l really like it Randy….l think it flows well but if you're not happy with it then it just won't feel right! Debx Randy Freie July 20, 2023 at 9:37 PM Thanks Deb, I must have edited this one half a dozen times. The flow still doesn't feel right. I'll keep working on it until I get it where I want it.