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On the Patio With My Daddio

Chillin on the patio me and my Daddio Jammin on the radio on my Bro's stereo Then came a loco girl from Cocomo She wore a thin muumuu doing quite a show The music got too too loud oh don't you know Then the Popo made a sudden cameo They said oh no the radio had to go Or it was bye bye for me and my Daddio So it was bye bye radio on the patio Then the muumuu went away very slow Since there was just no no other place to go The party on the low low on the kitchen flo

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Date: 7/20/2023 4:50:00 AM
What a fun poem Randy…l loved it! Debx
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Date: 7/20/2023 10:55:00 PM
Oh l really like it Randy….l think it flows well but if you're not happy with it then it just won't feel right! Debx
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Randy Freie
Date: 7/20/2023 9:37:00 PM
Thanks Deb, I must have edited this one half a dozen times. The flow still doesn't feel right. I'll keep working on it until I get it where I want it.

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