On the Other Side Part 1

Or you really in love with me
Or just loving what you see
Tis not enough to make the deal
True confessions from tires that squeel
Give it all or none will do
A real man of steel to fill big shoes
This is what I know about true love
Sent to me by creations from far above
To travel along that road with me
Must be more than a mere curiosity
To take the ultimate spinning ride
And still see me on the other side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 13, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Sad deep, and beautiful, enjoyed your poem. have a nice one,..p.d.
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