On the Lookout

ON THE LOOKOUT

native to the scene –
the yellowstone grand canyon -
this fat black raven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Maverick Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 1:51 PM
Really like the Native theme Daver; with yellow and black added into the colour scheme..."
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 6:52 PM
hey Daver, I am almost out of time here but wanted to stop by and say goodnight!
Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:15 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I can just see this scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
A   Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Daver, love the adventure... never been there..only on TV... good ending line for a haiku... always~ LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 3:07 PM
A great visual. reminding me of that area. I have gone past it many times.
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February 6, 2013 at 1:18 PM
:) good one Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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