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On the Lookout

ON THE LOOKOUT native to the scene – the yellowstone grand canyon - this fat black raven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 2/8/2013 1:51:00 PM
Really like the Native theme Daver; with yellow and black added into the colour scheme..."
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:52:00 PM
hey Daver, I am almost out of time here but wanted to stop by and say goodnight!
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Date: 2/7/2013 2:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I can just see this scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:37:00 PM
Daver, love the adventure... never been there..only on TV... good ending line for a haiku... always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:07:00 PM
A great visual. reminding me of that area. I have gone past it many times.
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Date: 2/6/2013 1:18:00 PM
:) good one Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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