On the Line

Incised lines concise...
Metal gurney feels like ice
Tight stitching looks nice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:12 PM
not sure what this was but you gave a great feeling of something cold.
Henderson Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Interesting read! Thanks for sharing! Steve
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