On the Line.

I put my heart on the line, 
But you hung up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 12:51 PM
So much said in just two lines, Amanda. Quite a profound statement you have made in this poem. I will remember your words here because we all put our hearts on the line at times and letting someone know they "hung up" might make them think twice before hurting another. Love, Carolyn
Anderson Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 1:13 PM
clever. i really liked this
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Sorry. I am sure that another who will be true will come on the phone. Keep writing. Sara
Malebranche Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Short, but makes so much sense....i love it...
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