On the Iris

forest of eye lash
from Saw to eye in a flash….
for water did dash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 2, 2010 at 11:52 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Robb. Love, Carol
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December 2, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Nice image you have created by goodimages, Robb
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December 1, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Another brilliant write Robb in a long list of Senryus that are super good and super cool my friend.. enjoyed with luv tonight..
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