On the Horizon

on the horizon red then orange peaks through clouds... sun plays hide and seek cold rain saturates pale pink running rose's blossoms... tears for fall's demise
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Adams Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 5:39 PM
such a beautiful write...autumn colors unfold well within your words...I for one would prefer summer again....love these haikus Sara :)
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October 28, 2013 at 1:26 PM
two different days.
Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 11:12 AM
love the charming, playful mood of your work, sara.. this glistens through!..lovely!..:) hugggs
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Nice imageries , sara
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October 28, 2013 at 8:22 AM
Yes, this is a perfect Fall write my friend! I really enjoyed your description of a Fall sunrise and the rain of a Fall day onto the last rose blossom (as least I am assuming it will be the last)! You have impressed me with the splendor of this incredible poem this morning! What a brilliant piece! I hope you are feeling better, you have been in my prayers! Great Work!!
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