On the High Mountaintop I See the Stars

On The High Mountaintop I See Glowing Stars

On the high mountaintop I see glowing stars
they wait for me shining so brightly there.
Blasting like high beams on speeding cars,
or glowing lanterns at the top of the stairs.

Those night sentinels dearly comfort me
with steadfastness in that galactic realm.
Beckoning, come forth, venture to be free
a ship sailing with you, master at the helm.

Over that horizon Hope awaits its turn
promises unfulfilled sing a melodic tune.
A man with great courage to use and burn
can find them with a leap over the moon.

More lies in abundance a bit farther out
mysteries, loves and great treasure galore.
When I find it,  I let out a mighty shout
thank God for creating every distant shore.

Yes my darling, you are dancing there as well
each journey starts with bright twinkle in your eyes.
Your joy and laughter are the starting bell
that sends my nightly ship across the skies. 

On the high mountaintop I see glowing stars
they wait for me shining so brightly there.
Blasting like high beams on speeding cars,
or glowing lanterns at the top of the stairs.

****** *******,  02-21-2015

Now entered in Shadow's contest.
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Haight Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Love your poem, Robert. Such beautiful imagery and hope in the galactic stars that pull and inspire us. Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Nature calls you away to write such an awesome work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 11:41 AM
superbly penned with excellent imagery and emotions, Robert.. you gave me a dreamy high!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:58 AM
such incredible imagery Robert - I love the continued dedication to your wonderful wife who obviously inspires your writing so so much:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 xxx
Holmes Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:24 AM
..."sends every nightly ship across the skies"...genius!...best wishes Peter
Lindley Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Peter. I have been reading your artistic writes and found some true gems to save this morn! You sir, have a pen with very great breadth and depth!
Sirak Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:52 AM
This is fantastic! I like how you put your love in the dance with you. The stars do seem to be much brighter, much closer out in the country or up in the mountains.
Lindley Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Thank you my friend. Always my wife is in my works, my heart, my soul and my mind! Stars twinkle ever brighter when she is near!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:48 PM
This is very beautiful and filled with celestial enchantment Robert. I especially loved your sixth stanza that expresses your motivation inspiring you to write this poem. Lovely! 7
Lindley Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:14 AM
Thank you my friend. I edited the poem, removed second of three repetitions of the opening stanza. So now that would be the fifth stanza instead of the sixth. My motivation was the poem Peter wrote and the love my wife Riza that she gives so generously. I dearly hate these slumps. Once I never got them but now they come every few weeks to last a few days at a time.
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