On the Data Lines

With a devastating voice
To calm your mindset and change
Ironing the game to be fine
Good obsession
But elders are starving
While they are looking after the livestock
I will just scrutinize what is visible
Or am I out of context?
If it makes you forlorn
It is you who have a spot on a trail
Or if I’m wrong, correct me
Don’t let the neighbor to laugh at me
An ancient accepted wisdom
What my peers are scared to talk?
Thoughts far away
Thinking bottomless
Belief of growing up beings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 21, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Emmanuel, interesting poem.... Linda
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May 21, 2014 at 11:09 AM
great write
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