This poem uses the "Cube" form => 4 lines of 4 words, with 4 word title; depth & meaning are the 3rd and 4rd dimensions.
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on the cusp poised precarious, point perched, lies threshold brink verge, the tipping-point pivot to, rise/fall from grace.
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