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August 13, 2023

Contest : Pick - A - Title, Vol. 38

Sponsored by : Edward Ibeh

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On the Crest of a Wave

An ancient mariner on the sea, I am sailing for ages on the rolling cobalt waves rising high and falling low. In the darkest of nights when the tempest rages, my boat pitches, and I toil to float, the journey is slow. Up above my wasteland of life in the seamless sky, the rainless clumps of cumulus cloud are hovering, in my desert heart I feel your melting shadow fly, make a sea in the profound depth of my yearning. There I drown the dregs of my dispersed despair, feel the fervent waves of joy roll for which I pine. Your charming smile the dancing waves gleefully share, my senses shimmer in the cadence of silver sunshine. My dream sky suffuses your sparkling azure serenity, sunburst colors paint panorama of passion in my dawn, hues of my emotion spread on the visage of your beauty, on the canvas of my ecstasy I see it mesmerizingly drawn. The tempest of torment can’t tarnish the luster of your grace, the pole star of your lure guides me on the course I crave. In the amorous night the bearing to your moonlit shore I trace, and find the fervor to sail with your love on the crest of a wave.
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Ibeh Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 8:27 PM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exquisite poem, Subimal:-) Way to go!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, Edward for the placement/
Sharma  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:10 PM
Oh wow, this is such a heartfelt and palpable write, which flows with myriad hues of evocative shades, reflecting yearning and sorrow, whilst then being enveloped by the serenity of love.. Which makes the heart glow with soulful bliss! Heartiest congratulations to you on the well deserved win, absolutely love this!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:43 PM
Thank you for the visit and for your thoughtful comments that encourage me. Thanks for liking the poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 2:00 PM
A wonderful write/story/ending. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed/great day.............
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Thank you, Paula.
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