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On the Bridge Too Far

The distance to you where you are, spans too wide on the bridge too far. I run the distance, yet, still I see, There's more stretched out ahead of me. Too far the bridge, too long to cross, unless your wings to me you toss!

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Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/27/2015 12:18:00 AM

I love the last line. ...you already have the wings. Your pen colors them well. Your words fly far, reaching hearts of many#7

Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/27/2015 8:25:00 AM

Thanks, njeri, for liking this poem and for reading my other Gary poems. ~~Darlene

Edward Orozco

Date: 9/5/2014 11:10:00 PM

Beautiful poem. =) almost brought a tear to my eye.. you have great talent! - Edward

Edward Orozco
Date: 9/10/2014 12:38:00 AM

Yes please consider me a friend =) God is truly amazing!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/5/2014 11:54:00 PM

Oh, Edward, thank you! You honor me. But every good gift comes from God. So if I have a speck of talent, I thank Him for it. Without Him, I can do nothing. I'm new here and making new friends. I hope I can consider you one of them. So now I am going to your site and read some of your poems. :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/5/2014 10:08:00 AM

Longing for what's been lost to us. Sometimes, it could be our own selves. This hit hard for me. Very nicely done!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/5/2014 6:15:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to comment, Drake. I hear what you're saying! The Bible says we know now only in part....