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On the Beach-Together

in passion's embrace
each the other to know-
washed by love's flow

lying side by side
in the incoming tide-
touched by nature's surge

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Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 9:42 PM

BRIAN..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

January 9, 2012 at 10:00 PM

I loved this one. Always a sucker for love on a beach! Congrats on your win in my contest with Nikko. WEll deserved!

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 9, 2012 at 7:14 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

January 7, 2012 at 2:09 PM

Congratulations on your fine win in the coontest, Brian. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2012 at 1:42 PM

Haven't seen the movie but your review makes it sound one worth watching..Enjoyed reading your review..Congrats on your win..Welcome back into the winners' circle..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 7, 2012 at 12:14 PM

This was a very romantic read for me... really enjoyed this one, Brian! I really liked how you depicted the scene here... congrats on your win :D

Gwendolen Song

January 7, 2012 at 3:36 AM

HI Brian. A new movie to me..the 2nd senryu is my fav one. Great lines describing a powerful scene. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen

Broken Butterfly

December 29, 2011 at 3:45 PM

I never saw this movie but I heard my mother talking about it many times. I think your senryu captured the romance. Thank you very much for my 1st place in your 8/9/10 contest.