On the Beach

Only place in summer that I want to be
Now I have time to relax and be with the family
 
Taking time out to sunbathe in the golden sun
Happy times paddling in the sea is such fabulous fun
Even getting sand in our sandwiches doesn’t spoil the day
 
Bathing in the rising tide of an inviting sea
Enjoying watching the children play so joyously
Ambling over to the hotdog stall for a cup of tea
Circling seagulls overhead cry endlessly
Hoping this will always be a trip we make annually.

06-24-14
Written for Summer Acrostic Contest sponsored by Francine Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Draeger Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 4:07 PM
I like the acrostic feature, adds to the charm of the piece.
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July 14, 2014 at 10:44 PM
:), Hope you two are well..PD
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July 15, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Both very busy with life Linda which keeps us from writing together but we are both well thanks :-) Jan xxx
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July 12, 2014 at 11:42 PM
Sounds fun. I enjoyed this. Happy Writing and God bless you.
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July 13, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Regina. Hugs Jan xx
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June 24, 2014 at 7:28 PM
Hi, sounds like fun, I don't know what we will do this summer. :) This summer NO BEACH for me.... LOL... HotDogs yes.. tea NO.... Love the golden time, you'll have with the family... Linda
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June 25, 2014 at 4:00 AM
My part of the poem is based on memories from the past Linda my son is grown up now and flown the nest but we used to have lots of fun on the local beach. I now find it a place of solace and go and listen to the waves and I am at peace I often write there now in fact I'm heading there later today for some 'me' time. Hugs Jan xxx
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June 24, 2014 at 1:28 PM
Sounds like a stupendous time...Is there room for one more :)
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June 24, 2014 at 1:33 PM
The more the merrier Tim you are welcome to join us any time my friend:-) As long as the weather is good I'm heading to the beach tomorrow I find it so tranquil just listening to the waves and there I can be truly at peace with my thoughts. Hugs Jan xxxx
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