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On the Beach

Open spaces on sand, for fun and frolic
Noise of waves, sound sweet as music

Taking a dip in blue depths, curling with tides
Horizon at sunset, orange hues give idyllic vibes
Eat local fish, and enjoy drinks like thirsty tribes

Blowing winds, turn the windmills apace
Enjoy the sunshine, and meditate for solace 
Arrange the sea shells, look for pearls in case
Catch a sun tan, if you like, with a brave face
Handball if you play, win or lose with grace



Date write: 20.6.2014
Form: Acrostic (rhymed)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/20/2014 10:47:00 PM
wow, I love this one and I love the beach. For me your best poem of the three I just read.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Andrea

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