On the Beach

sparkling rays from sky
as surfers ride on the waves...
on sand,love resides



CONTEST:" Ocean-ku "sponsored by Heather Ober.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 1:01 AM
I sure do enjoy a poem about a beach. Just love it.
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Very nice...Donna
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