On the Beach

Moon glow on the beach
waves kissing lagoons soft shore
gentle winds flowing

Mother appears there
her shell hides life to bury
joy from distant love



Christopher Bunton

For tropical moonlight contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Christopher. Love, Carol
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March 19, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Thank you!
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Congrats Christopher on your win.Enjoyed the read.
Bunton Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Thank you!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:03 PM
congrats Christopher on a fab win for this tropical treasure luv..
Bunton Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Thank you!!
Merryman Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Happy to see you on the winner's list, Christopher. Lovely haiku. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Bunton Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Thank You!
Horsman Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Glad this was a winner, enjoyed. harry
Bunton Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 7:17 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 12:20 AM
a very interesting one this is and lovely images, particularly in the first haiku. I see it got a win. BIG congrats to you.
Bunton Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 6:03 AM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Happy for your win Christopher ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 5:20 PM
Thank you!!
Hunt Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Enjoyed your poem ,good write and flow. Good imagery.
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Thank you!!
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March 13, 2012 at 4:09 PM
No rhyme, no metaphors, no meaning, no point. Not even a poem.
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 5:19 PM
I think that most of what I write sucks too. Thanks for stopping by.
Horne Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 4:07 PM
lovely piece. Congrats on your wins : )
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 5:14 PM
Thank you!!
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