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On the Banks of the Potomac

We were accustomed to being in the military living in the barracks, having inspections and following the rules. Yet, at summer's zenith, my sweetheart and I and our two friends left behind the Ft. Myer base in Arlington, Virginia, to spend a Saturday night at Lady Bird Johnson Park. We had such exhilarated feelings being in our early twenties. Fireflies lit the pathways, the freedom of that festive nightfall. Our youthfulness and our revelry shined in that humid July gloaming. We drank to the joys of Navy life with Jack Daniel's whiskey and Boone's Farm strawberry wine. We soon became inebriated, quoting Poe and Hemingway. What a starry jubilant soiree, a mirthful moon-blessed eve. All four of us vowed to keep in touch, then we fell asleep on the banks of the Potomac. My love and I strengthened our union, our "Navy Baby" was born on a late November morning. Our friends we spent so many joyous times with were gone with yesterday. Years have passed. My love and I had a cherish of each other, but there were troubled times too. The decades since that carefree and heady midsummer night passed too swiftly. My husband is neath white marble in the Veterans Cemetery. He passed suddenly and unexpectantly at the age of fifty-nine. He lived long enough to enjoy our two precious grandchildren for a few years. He loved them, our daughter and son-in-law so very much. I reminisce, I gently dream some mournful nights when the moon is bright and nigh- we fell asleep on the banks of the Potomac.

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Date: 12/6/2023 6:34:00 AM
Great storytelling.. is this really the poem you feel most proud about? Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/6/2023 11:05:00 AM
My deep gratitude, Silent One, I'm grateful for the podium placement. Because it's the Christmastime season, I especially began to feel much nostalgia for the early years of my marriage in my late husband's memory. One of my poems I'm most proud of is the poem "Welcome Home." I may submit this poem in a contest that also permits older poems. My late husband did do well in the military, and I was proud of his military record. Getting drunk isn't something I was proud of, lol! Joyous Christmastime to you.
Date: 12/6/2023 5:34:00 AM
Regina, Congratulations on two fronts. First of all, your first place podium position in this contest. Secondly, this stunning tour-de-force which epitomises every aspect of your innate competency as a gifted writer. Immaculate Happy days and nights ahead Howard
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Regina Elliott
Date: 12/6/2023 6:08:00 AM
My deepest gratitude, Howard, you are such a kind presence on the Soup. Congratulations to you also on your 1st Place podium victory with your fine and outstanding poem. Enjoy it today, my friend
Date: 10/29/2023 7:36:00 AM
Hi Regina, This was a very captivating narrative . You captured so much in this story of youth, love, and loss in the retelling of your personal journey. Enjoyed.
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Regina Elliott
Date: 10/29/2023 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nancy. It's very kind of you to take the time to read some of my writing. Have a restful Sunday night. ~

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