On Swamp

When there is no hope in soul,
When someone’s not really close,
When your heart is disconsolate, -
Life is looking like a morass.


Only golden water lilies -
There you will find - illusions.
Silly dreams unable to save you, -
Stem is fragile, weak as usual..

When the all strengths are exhausted,
Kind foe, - that is well known, -
shows up to pull you out ...
Wouldn't be better if he'd got late..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Welcomed Marina, keep up the fine work...
Armania Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Thank you for welcoming me, Charlie! I'm very glad you liked the poem. Will do my best.
Bell Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 4:43 AM
Beautiful interpretation - a good read, I enjoyed it, Marina , Welcome
Armania Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you for welcoming me here, Michael. Trying to translate from my old stock. Glad that you liked it.
Capitano Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Well done Marina and welcome to the soup.
Armania Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Thank you and sorry for the rough translation from original.
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