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On Soup

(A TETRA-PENTAMETER...) (8 Lines, 10 Syllables) Many a talented writer features Here on Soup. Whatever dreamt up creatures Rise and shine in the poetic limelight, They're inspiring! And most Soupers just might Develop their own for the site. Alone, Creatively, their own skills hone. Mind blown! But proof they've grown... In order to succeed, Indeed, write to make others want to read. (10 Lines, 8 Syllables) Many a talented writer Features here on Soup. Whatever Dreamt up creatures rise and shine in The poetic limelight, they're in- Spiring! And most Soupers just might Develop their own for the site. Alone, creatively, their own Skills hone. Mind blown! But proof they've grown. In order to succeed, indeed, Write to make others want to read. 21st October 2021

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2021 5:43:00 AM

love both versions of the poem natasha, i have learned so so so much since I joined as a total novice to poetry (and dare I say i didn't like poetry at school lol) hugs jan xx

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 10/27/2021 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Jan xx I'm a total novice too. I think each writer finds their comfortable form. I never knew about all the different types to me a poem was a poem however it came lol. Yes there's so much more to learn. All the best.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/25/2021 11:29:00 AM

Bravo Natasha well wrote and said Here , here I only hope many more will take the time to read and comment on this your poem

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 10/25/2021 11:36:00 AM

Thanks Christopher. I was encouraged by a fellow Souper to give this form a go. And this was my 3rd try, and as they say, "3rd time lucky!" I got it!! Was quite a challenge... But that's the wonderful thing about how poets on this site help eachother to grow in their writing. Thank you for your encouraging words :-D