On Soft Clay

Preferable is for Man, on

Soft clay, his opinions to write,


For 


Easy to erase them will be 

When the truth he finds! 





 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    15 February 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/16/2016 9:34:00 AM
Simple piece but a bright valuable gem, philosophically crafted. 7 i feel. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:32:00 AM
Ooh, so well said.
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:46:00 AM
Scott, my friend, delighted to see you again! Thank you!
Date: 2/15/2016 12:44:00 PM
Your thoughts enter our hearts and sting us with the reality of their weight, as you kiss our souls with the truth of your words. Emile.
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Date: 2/15/2016 2:00:00 PM
Your comment, dear Emile, is a poem in itself that obliterates my humble writing! Thank you!
Date: 2/15/2016 11:31:00 AM
Yes, you nailed it again ... CayCay
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, dear CayCay!
Date: 2/15/2016 8:45:00 AM
very universal in tone,Sir.really loved it.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, Miraj, for your appreciation!
Date: 2/15/2016 8:08:00 AM
Hopefully when he finds the truth he will write it upon his heart so that it will never be forgotten. I enjoyed pondering stone and clay this morning my friend.
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:27:00 AM
Richard, my good friend, so happy to see you! Thank you for your visit! Keep pondering! It is good! Haha!
Date: 2/15/2016 7:43:00 AM
good for man to meet others halfway, demetrios... such a fine write!..huggs
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:31:00 AM
Yes, it is good dear, nette, to do so in the case of opinion but as long as the truth is concerned, I think, there is no halfway. There is only knowledge or ignorance! Don't you think? Thank you so much, for visiting!
Date: 2/15/2016 3:59:00 AM
- Lessons will still be in his heart - Great written ! - Best wishes for a lovely day, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thank you my dearest, Anne-Lise, for your delightful visit and lovely comment!
Date: 2/15/2016 2:16:00 AM
What a thought. Maybe that's why the Ten Commandments were etched into stone, so they couldn't be altered. I enjoyed the wisdom of this epigram ... we would do well to understand the difference between opinions and truths!
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:26:00 AM
Yes, my friend Timothy, this is what was meant writing on stone: That what was written, should never be altered! Man however should not do this for he is not wise, as our Lord is! Thank you for your feedback!
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