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On Soft Clay

Preferable is for Man, on

Soft clay, his opinions to write,


For 


Easy to erase them will be 

When the truth he finds! 





 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    15 February 2016

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Bl Devnath

February 16, 2016 at 9:34 AM

Simple piece but a bright valuable gem, philosophically crafted. 7 i feel. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Scott Thirtyseven

February 16, 2016 at 6:32 AM

Ooh, so well said.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 16, 2016 at 6:46 AM

Scott, my friend, delighted to see you again! Thank you!

Emile Pinet

February 15, 2016 at 12:44 PM

Your thoughts enter our hearts and sting us with the reality of their weight, as you kiss our souls with the truth of your words. Emile.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 2:00 PM

Your comment, dear Emile, is a poem in itself that obliterates my humble writing! Thank you!

CayCay Godwin

February 15, 2016 at 11:31 AM

Yes, you nailed it again ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 11:47 AM

Thank you, dear CayCay!

Miraj Raha

February 15, 2016 at 8:45 AM

very universal in tone,Sir.really loved it.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 10:25 AM

Thank you, Miraj, for your appreciation!

Richard Lamoureux

February 15, 2016 at 8:08 AM

Hopefully when he finds the truth he will write it upon his heart so that it will never be forgotten. I enjoyed pondering stone and clay this morning my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 10:27 AM

Richard, my good friend, so happy to see you! Thank you for your visit! Keep pondering! It is good! Haha!

Nette Onclaud

February 15, 2016 at 7:43 AM

good for man to meet others halfway, demetrios... such a fine write!..huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 10:31 AM

Yes, it is good dear, nette, to do so in the case of opinion but as long as the truth is concerned, I think, there is no halfway. There is only knowledge or ignorance! Don't you think? Thank you so much, for visiting!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 15, 2016 at 3:59 AM

- Lessons will still be in his heart - Great written ! - Best wishes for a lovely day, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 5:22 AM

Thank you my dearest, Anne-Lise, for your delightful visit and lovely comment!

Timothy Hicks

February 15, 2016 at 2:16 AM

What a thought. Maybe that's why the Ten Commandments were etched into stone, so they couldn't be altered. I enjoyed the wisdom of this epigram ... we would do well to understand the difference between opinions and truths!

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 15, 2016 at 5:26 AM

Yes, my friend Timothy, this is what was meant writing on stone: That what was written, should never be altered! Man however should not do this for he is not wise, as our Lord is! Thank you for your feedback!

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