On Second Thought

On Second Thought



On second thought, I stand corrected;

We actually, truly are very connected;

Back and forth poems always sharing;

Things about them constantly comparing.


Maybe corrections may have to be made;

Then back and forth ideas we will trade

Until happy balance eventually do reach

The both do decide to stroll on the beach.


Should we write a poem about beach sand?

And two lovers holding each others hand;

A beautiful sunset settling on a silent shore

All around are dainty colors that I do adore.


All of a sudden dusk is finally will be here

Thoughts of another poem start to appear

Will write them down and carefully read

God gave me exactly what I did need.


James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran

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