On Seashore

As a child, I had scribbled trifles on sea sands,
And often allowed them to get wiped by wave's hands;
Mansions and palaces on the sand I had built too,
When they got destroyed by waters I felt no woe.

This mania soon got altered to writing names,
Of persons accompanied playing many games;
The sand mansions too slowly shifted to sculptures,
And seemed in style and structure so voluptuous.

Thus with many scribbling and sculptures, times rolled on,
I got someone who looked like a girl-sculpture-swan;
We, together now, scribbled and sculptured pure love,
That as though would envy the celestials above...

The sea waves witnessed our wavy ways and wondered,
The weather too often changed its mood and thundered;
When our wedding bells aside sea happened to peal,
The sea and her creatures seemed brim filling with zeal...

The sea, then, our delightful honeymoon witnessed,
The shapes and moods of sculptures with feelings got mixed;
Sands and shells turned beds cozily decorated,
Moon and stars the ambiance illuminated...

The buds of love blossomed and on due time bore fruits,
We came to the shores now bringing our naughty kids;
They scribbled, made sculptures in magnificent styles,
We built castles within while enjoying their smiles.

Amidst tangles of routines shores now forgotten,
Our children married and their kids now begotten;
We, one in heart, hand in hand, memories Cudding,
Cherubims of happiness within us wedding...

She too is gone now I like a seagull forlorn,
Taking shelter aside the shore and within mourn;
Cherishing all good and bad memories of old,
Scribble and build sculptures keeping my heart still bold.

I see this sea and shore as paths of transcendence,
Wherefrom my spirit will sore to the resplendence;
Where the splendor of God showers on me his grace,
Where my eyes will see realities face to face.



28 July 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/4/2021 8:03:00 AM
amazing poetry "I see this sea and shore as paths of transcendence, Wherefrom my spirit will sore to the resplendence; Where the splendor of God showers on me his grace, Where my eyes will see realities face to face." beautiful stanza... congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/19/2021 8:36:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/3/2021 8:42:00 AM
I like this--the ocean is indeed the closest we get to eternity's 'awesomeness' in this mortal world--congrats on your win! [by the way, is 'sore' in the last stanza a typo for 'soar'?]
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/19/2021 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/3/2021 4:31:00 AM
I like how this poem comes full circle around to your children enjoying the sea also "They scribbled, made sculptures in magnificent styles, We built castles within while enjoying their smiles." Congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2021 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful to read once again, Christuraj, congratulations:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/2/2021 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/2/2021 7:42:00 PM
oh this is beautiful
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/2/2021 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/29/2021 1:56:00 AM
A great walk through life, Christuraj, you have precious memories to cherish and of course, more sand castles to build:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/1/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/28/2021 10:16:00 AM
to have loved and crossed the years with joy is a blessing to hold and cherish
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/1/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/28/2021 8:29:00 AM
So rich with memories and love. What a write.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/29/2021 4:38:00 AM
Thank you very much.
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