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On Prairies Lovely

on prairies lovely combed with moth wings emerald.... barbed pines prick clay's flesh (( for Charles Henderson's Strict Haiku 2 Contest))

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/17/2017 5:29:00 AM

So much said with little words. Congrats nette for been featured. :)

David Smalling

Date: 1/5/2011 12:01:00 PM

Awesome ... love the investment of metaphor and imagination.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/5/2011 7:25:00 AM

Hi Nette. What a well deserved success you achieved with this stunning work. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2011 5:17:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your win in the "Strict Haiku 2" contest by Charles Henderson. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 8:21:00 PM

congratulations on your fantastic win, nette. Sorry you lost your two siblings. Dale was killed by a drunk driver years ago. He was really the best guy I ever met! Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/4/2011 8:17:00 PM

Many congratulations for this beautiful Haiku and win.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/4/2011 8:03:00 PM

lovely haiku Nette, congrats on your win in the contest

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/4/2011 4:33:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win, this is such a beautiful haiku - I love the image of the prairies combed with moth wings emerald and then the barbed pines sharp, beautiful.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/4/2011 4:30:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Charles, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/4/2011 3:48:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your wonderful and well deserved win in the Haiku contest with such lovely words my friend.. thankxx for your grand expressions on my contest wins also ..always uplifting luv... enjoy your top ten success once again with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2011 2:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 1/4/2011 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your second place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/4/2011 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Nette! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/4/2011 8:05:00 AM

very evocative Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2011 7:52:00 AM

Another marvelous winning poem....always a little of the unusual, which I love !! :) Nice one, Nette!!

Deb Radke

Date: 1/4/2011 7:04:00 AM

ps. forgot to rate '7'. Would rate '10' if I could. So good. Deb

Deb Radke

Date: 1/4/2011 6:52:00 AM

Oh Nette, this is perfect. It made me read it again and again, each time finding a new feeling, a new vision. Congratulations. I think this is what a haiku should be. Hidden at first, then revealing slowly the meaning, the scene to be found inside. Congratulations.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/4/2011 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your well deserved win-Namaskar(in my mother tongue it is 'namaskar' and not 'namaste'-though I Iike both the words)-thanks a lot-kashinath

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/2/2011 10:51:00 PM

soup mail again

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 4:47:00 PM

Spectacular Nette and good luck in the contest..but.. no caps ..even the title ..no caps allowed my friend.. so fix it so not to be disqualified luv... otherwise it is super grand entry .. hope your 2011 is poetically correct...with lots of luv..my friend..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 1/1/2011 2:47:00 PM

Beautiful words and imagery Nette. Thank you for your comments only she's mamma's girl. My name seems to confuse everyone but I am a lady= )

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/1/2011 9:15:00 AM

Beautiful images, I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/1/2011 8:08:00 AM

A beautiful image, Nette! Best wishes for success in the contest and a happy New Year! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2011 7:22:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me ..I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M...Good luck in the worthy contest...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2011 4:54:00 AM

Combed with moth wings and wearing bracelets... these images create a very pleasing pen picture of praries, nette. Happy New year. and good luck in the contest