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On Prairies Lovely

on prairies lovely
combed with moth wings emerald....
barbed pines prick clay's flesh


(( for Charles Henderson's
     Strict Haiku 2 Contest))

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 6/17/2017 5:29:00 AM So much said with little words. Congrats nette for been featured. :) Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 1/5/2011 12:01:00 PM Awesome ... love the investment of metaphor and imagination. Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 1/5/2011 7:25:00 AM Hi Nette. What a well deserved success you achieved with this stunning work. Eamon Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/5/2011 5:17:00 AM Congratulations Nette on your win in the "Strict Haiku 2" contest by Charles Henderson. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/4/2011 8:21:00 PM congratulations on your fantastic win, nette. Sorry you lost your two siblings. Dale was killed by a drunk driver years ago. He was really the best guy I ever met! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 1/4/2011 8:17:00 PM Many congratulations for this beautiful Haiku and win. Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 1/4/2011 8:03:00 PM lovely haiku Nette, congrats on your win in the contest Login to Reply

Eiken Laan Date: 1/4/2011 4:33:00 PM Nette, congratulations on your win, this is such a beautiful haiku - I love the image of the prairies combed with moth wings emerald and then the barbed pines sharp, beautiful. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/4/2011 4:30:00 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Charles, nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/4/2011 3:48:00 PM Congrats Nette on your wonderful and well deserved win in the Haiku contest with such lovely words my friend.. thankxx for your grand expressions on my contest wins also ..always uplifting luv... enjoy your top ten success once again with luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/4/2011 2:36:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/4/2011 10:09:00 AM Congratulations Nette on your second place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/4/2011 8:34:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Nette! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/4/2011 8:05:00 AM very evocative Congrad's on your win! Light & Love Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/4/2011 7:52:00 AM Another marvelous winning poem....always a little of the unusual, which I love !! :) Nice one, Nette!! Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 1/4/2011 7:04:00 AM ps. forgot to rate '7'. Would rate '10' if I could. So good. Deb Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 1/4/2011 6:52:00 AM Oh Nette, this is perfect. It made me read it again and again, each time finding a new feeling, a new vision. Congratulations. I think this is what a haiku should be. Hidden at first, then revealing slowly the meaning, the scene to be found inside. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/4/2011 6:07:00 AM Congratulations Nette on your well deserved win-Namaskar(in my mother tongue it is 'namaskar' and not 'namaste'-though I Iike both the words)-thanks a lot-kashinath Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 1/2/2011 10:51:00 PM soup mail again Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/1/2011 4:47:00 PM Spectacular Nette and good luck in the contest..but.. no caps ..even the title ..no caps allowed my friend.. so fix it so not to be disqualified luv... otherwise it is super grand entry .. hope your 2011 is poetically correct...with lots of luv..my friend.. Login to Reply

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway Date: 1/1/2011 2:47:00 PM Beautiful words and imagery Nette. Thank you for your comments only she's mamma's girl. My name seems to confuse everyone but I am a lady= ) Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 1/1/2011 9:15:00 AM Beautiful images, I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/1/2011 8:08:00 AM A beautiful image, Nette! Best wishes for success in the contest and a happy New Year! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/1/2011 7:22:00 AM Reads like a winner to me ..I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M...Good luck in the worthy contest...Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/1/2011 4:54:00 AM Combed with moth wings and wearing bracelets... these images create a very pleasing pen picture of praries, nette. Happy New year. and good luck in the contest Login to Reply

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