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On Point

Pith is pithier than pithy -it’s not a question of if. You know atoms are tiny when you get at ‘em. Sometimes they’re the point. Meanings have layers like lasagna. Two or three should suffice. Any more is a little less nice. Less is more is the better advice. But I sense I said that twice. Lasagna and spaghetti go to together like a Yeti and Big Foot. So maybe skip the spaghetti. Are you aiming to have a carb overload? You better avoid that road. I like little feet as opposed to a big foot -they’re tinier. More minor. Less dimensional. They can be on point -and that’s plane to see. I could say more but I don’t see the point, in that case.

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