On of Us,None of Them

Something big is happening ,and I am going to need your help
I just want a chance to make thing right
one of us one of them
or  none of us none of them
why would I believe anything you say?
Because it is true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 6, 2016 at 9:32 PM
nice To see this One again. LINDA
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January 8, 2016 at 9:48 PM
makide, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
Godwyn Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Nice try . Marvel Godwyn
Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 5:15 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Makinde. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Creative and interesting thoughts well penned, Makinde
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv.. nice write..luv..
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May 13, 2011 at 4:25 PM
wonderful poem, that kind of happend to me today, and i needed a chance to make it right, and to my surprise they did, thank you..
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May 13, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Makinde, great poem,, thanks for sharing..p.d.
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