Notes About The Poem
Trying a different approach with this poem. A slight change In pronunciation of words to rhyme.
Castle ( CA SELL )
dazzle ( DA ZELL )
marvel ( MAR VELL)
HOPE YOU ENJOY
On my walk
On my walk across the sandy beach I stumble upon a beautiful shell, which only kings and queens and princesses would possess in their tall and grand castle.
An oval shape, was this shell. Its smooth edges curved so well, and as the sunset shadowed down on us , it began to shimmer and dazzle.
Holographic pink and blues dancing in my palm, smiling, I just stood in awe, bewildered in marvel .
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