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On My Tv

on my tv
a sticky handprint
her small coffin

deathhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2012 at 8:16 PM

Charles. I saw the remark below. I understood this one but I think the problem is that the two "episodes" are not side by side. I mean, the small coffin would be better to use in conjunction with another "picture" of something near the graveyard or at the funeral home. I liked the idea here, just thought the two ideas needed to be more closely related in time.