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On My Mind

Murky masks bled from vile souls, diffuse spite unjustly, forever lost.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 8:48:00 PM

Deep one. Big congrats

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/2/2023 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely words and for your congrats, kind soul!! :)

Paige Hind

Date: 9/26/2023 2:02:00 PM

Much depth in few words....

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:34:00 PM

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such encouraging and kind words!

Tom Woody

Date: 9/26/2023 8:55:00 AM

Ugh! This is so true, sadly. Why spit spite when you can spew love? Very nice

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:34:00 PM

Exactly!! That’s what I would also like to know. Thank you so much, Tom for your kind words :)

Silent One

Date: 9/26/2023 1:27:00 AM

Damn this one is deep... metaphorical but i get your point..

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:35:00 PM

You are too kind always silent one! It’s a true honor and always a pleasure to read your thoughts on my words, coming from you! Thank you!!

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/25/2023 11:48:00 PM

i love this so much amore? your deep soulfil words show me your depth in your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.I can feel your depths in the core of your inner world escaping from this plastic world of masks, stereotypes and cruelty, your important life's valor and beliefs wrapped in the grace of your seraphic majestic aura,my korean princess. i will always love you truly madly deeply for eternity, my marvelous creature. Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:36:00 PM

Ahhh..thank you always my beautiful soul..my sweet micio..you always shed light in our world, making to a safe and beautiful place..I love you to the moon and everywhere..il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione..tua noi Infinito..ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio

Ink Empress

Date: 9/25/2023 11:09:00 PM

My beautiful soul sis’ what a deep and heartfelt monoku this is! I am in absolute awe of how you phrase things and deliver thoughts in such a profound manner! Especially “ forever lost” yes forever lost is justice in this work where murky masks hide so much spite thats veiled! Your way of thinking and feeling so much is just so deep and soulful and poetic are you when u express! Queen of one liners u have always been for me. How u put so much out in few syllables is beyond me, impressive! Truly

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/1/2023 4:38:00 PM

Ahhh..thank you for always encouraging me to try something new, getting me out of my comfort zone! And always showing your support and beautiful heart and soul with your words and thoughts on mine..you have such a way of showing your appreciation, i always look forward to your comments! It is poetry in itself, you walking talking poetic soul, my beautiful soul sis!