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On My Branch

Left on a branch that has a crack... I sit still and stare out to a world of distract... Blissful memories that hold my thoughts with a grip... As fallen sins still have the power to trip... I'm excepting the break and the fall that will come... Having said my peace to the moon and sun... It's not the drop as much as the snap that I fear... So I will close my eyes and let faith whisper in my ear...

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/5/2012 9:28:00 PM

If you have faith, everything will be alright. A very nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 11/4/2012 2:10:00 PM

love this deep write, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2012 9:21:00 AM

A VIVID VIEW MICHAEL LUV OF DEEPEST EMOTIONS ..ALWAYS EXPRESSED IN WONDROUS LANGUAGE .. HOPE U R NOT TOO DISTRESSED OVER THE SEVERE DAMAGE SANDY LEFT BEHIND .. SO MANY LOST SO MUCH .. ANOTHER COASTAL STORM PREDICTED FOR WEDN LUV ..SO BE CAREFUL..SO HAPPY U 2 R SAFE ..AND WE HAVE OUR POETRY AND GMEN TO KEEP US POSITIVE AMONG ALL THE NEGATIVE ENERGY LATELY .. JG IN HUGGING MODE ..XOXO

Jordan Dickinson

Date: 11/3/2012 3:32:00 PM

I really like this Michael, awesome imagery! Jordan

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 11/2/2012 3:16:00 AM

This is quite a haunting poem......but love the hole anology well done Michael :) Shaz

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2012 3:11:00 PM

i see this branch liken to life itself.. this is a wonderful poem, Michael,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/31/2012 2:58:00 PM

Hello Michael, sorry to hear about Sandy... , stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2012 9:31:00 PM

This is what is referred to as radical acceptance, you know the branch is cracked and you know you will fall. Keep the faith Brother, it is the only way to break the fall. Good poem, lots to think about.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 8:21:00 AM

A pleasure to sit and read poetry this morning. We are getting snow from the Hurricane and the cold northern air coming down from Canada here is Piqua, Ohio this morning. I am glad your excellent poem was one that I came across to read. I hope you are having a good day and if you are in the mist of this weather that you are safe and remain safe Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2012 9:01:00 PM

Hola, Michael, a very ending lovely sound.... .. good night~ PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2012 3:58:00 PM

This is a poem that I think is really beautiful Michael. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/29/2012 2:07:00 PM

This is a fantastic descriptive write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and intriguing poem! What a fine piece, just like usual...spectacular, Great Work!!