On Monday

where are you?
the water is cold
our moment is gone
the lights shut down

even if we wait
for another bus
all seats are taken
the road is closed

the moon can't wait
the things you said
can't erase itself
your lies are true

you caught me
I held your hand
to help me stand
you made me fall

where are you?
I am cold
the moment is gone
you are gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 27, 2012 at 9:22 PM
Elektra, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
Austin Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 2:31 PM
I like the way you relate your passion to the moment. Congrats on the selection. daver
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November 22, 2012 at 12:44 PM
A touching - well written poem Elektra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Marrier Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 11:23 AM
i feel your sadness. wishing you hapiness today. happy thanksgiving.
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