Gary Bateman Poet Quintain (English)

Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  I co-authored this Quintain poem, "On Meeting You Most Beautiful Now," with my friend and colleague Liam McDaid on November 13, 2014. Liam had previously posted this one first. I am just now getting around to posting it with my poems. You, the reader, may enjoy reading this one again!! (Gary Bateman, November 13, 2014) (Quintain)

Categories:  allegory, desire, devotion, emotions, feelings, love, and metaphor.

On Meeting You Most Beautiful Now

On Meeting You Most Beautiful Now

On meeting you most beautiful now with
adoring maiden kisses and loving thoughts
whilst deeply inhaling one warm breath
and a stout sip of the finest old grog auld
mountain dew breathing a precious pure.

Golden leaves sweetly float in a dancing
twirl with a shining inside vision so sweet
of us walking hand in hand on golden sands
as perfect waves unfold into a carpet of blue 
to white as romantic thoughts signal our love.

Against the deepest walls warm of soft light
silent echoes whisper true as sweetly melting
emotions palpably touch our hearts beating as 
one, whilst brewing kisses from peach-colored 
clouds mesmerize us with their enchanted beauty.

Silver treasured thoughts of love and happiness
speak volumes to the beautiful dream vision of
a gem of dancing petal flowers and one red rose
that captivate my visions of you dancing in the
very depths of my dreams as I sleep blissfully.

On soft clouds in the bright azure sky above,
at times, I gaze continually skyward on days
when I think of you so bright and so beautiful
and see your lovely face etched in the cerulean
sky and feel the passion of your love and presence.

With the finest of texture and the scent of a most 
sensual red rose, I watch as its petals gently land
now on the sweet dew ground and I thank Almighty
God above on meeting you most beautiful now as my
thoughts of love for you touch the depths of my soul.

The indelible nature of our true love and happiness
create certain visions of fire-storms of an unbridled
passion and pleasure that eternally speak to us both
of the sweet love and magical enchantment we share
as our hearts beat now as one in God’s grace forever.

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – November 13, 2014
(Quintain)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 19, 2014 at 5:07 AM Silver treasuring thoughts I love you peachy beautiful dream gem/ Gary your poem / and liam you too/ honey and brew/you two Love. Take care XXXXX RAJAT Gary Bateman November 19, 2014 at 6:47 AM Rajat, Thanks my great friend. Glad you liked this one from Liam and me. The words do leave an enchanting message. Liam and I have another one under construction in addition to our upcoming solo writes individually. I will be by to see your latest works as well. All the Best!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter November 16, 2014 at 7:48 PM A most beautiful collaboration between you and Liam, my dear friends. Very romantic piece! enjoyed reading it again! lol... Have a great week Gary and Liam! :) Definite a 7 for me! Love and hugs! xxx D. Gary Bateman November 17, 2014 at 3:52 PM "D" Thanks again so much!! I think both of us (and certainly I do) appreciate your read and visits to our poetry (both when we write together and when each of us write solo). I wanted you to know too that I happen to be a great admirer of your poetry as well. I know that you've been writing quite a while. Thanks for the "7." Keep Writing too!! Best!! Gary XOXO

Liam Mcdaid November 16, 2014 at 12:04 PM reading this really our combination of feelings gary and emotions sparked this piece and reading all the wonderful comments thank you all for your heartfelt beautiful words and have a blessed beautiful sunday Gary Bateman November 16, 2014 at 12:14 PM Amen Liam!! This turned out to be a most blessed and wonderful write. The Leprechaun Chorus is singing most loudly and smiling with this one!! Best Always Mate, Gary

Jerry T Curtis November 15, 2014 at 8:52 PM Wow Gary, I need to stop by here more often, keep writing Gary Bateman November 15, 2014 at 8:56 PM Jerry, Thanks!! I also need to drop by to visit your poems too!! I certainly have not forgotten you either. As our network of contacts and colleagues expands it's much work keeping up with everyone -- let alone just writing. Best Always!! Gary (P.S. Keep Writing as well!!) Gary Bateman November 15, 2014 at 8:53 PM Thanks Greg!! I guess our names are so similar. At the end of the day, it's all good!! Best Wishes and say "Hi" to Kansas for me. Cheers, Gary

David Meade November 15, 2014 at 8:25 PM Why did you stop -- more!! Well done my friend -- craftsmanship!! Gary Bateman November 15, 2014 at 8:59 PM More is definitely on the way David. In fact, Liam and I are working on a co-write now for release this next week, in addition to our respective individuals projects as well. Best Always, Gary

Nette Onclaud November 15, 2014 at 7:37 PM you sweeten love's pot as words carry the depth of your emotion through your artpiece. Very well crafted, greg...huggs Gary Bateman November 15, 2014 at 9:01 PM Thanks so much Nette!! Glad you like this co-write effort from Liam and me. Best Always, Gary