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Author's Notes:  I co-authored this Quintain poem, "On Meeting You Most Beautiful Now," with my friend and colleague Liam McDaid on November 13, 2014. Liam had previously posted this one first. I am just now getting around to posting it with my poems. You, the reader, may enjoy reading this one again!! (Gary Bateman, November 13, 2014) (Quintain)

Categories:  allegory, desire, devotion, emotions, feelings, love, and metaphor.

On Meeting You Most Beautiful Now On meeting you most beautiful now with adoring maiden kisses and loving thoughts whilst deeply inhaling one warm breath and a stout sip of the finest old grog auld mountain dew breathing a precious pure. Golden leaves sweetly float in a dancing twirl with a shining inside vision so sweet of us walking hand in hand on golden sands as perfect waves unfold into a carpet of blue to white as romantic thoughts signal our love. Against the deepest walls warm of soft light silent echoes whisper true as sweetly melting emotions palpably touch our hearts beating as one, whilst brewing kisses from peach-colored clouds mesmerize us with their enchanted beauty. Silver treasured thoughts of love and happiness speak volumes to the beautiful dream vision of a gem of dancing petal flowers and one red rose that captivate my visions of you dancing in the very depths of my dreams as I sleep blissfully. On soft clouds in the bright azure sky above, at times, I gaze continually skyward on days when I think of you so bright and so beautiful and see your lovely face etched in the cerulean sky and feel the passion of your love and presence. With the finest of texture and the scent of a most sensual red rose, I watch as its petals gently land now on the sweet dew ground and I thank Almighty God above on meeting you most beautiful now as my thoughts of love for you touch the depths of my soul. The indelible nature of our true love and happiness create certain visions of fire-storms of an unbridled passion and pleasure that eternally speak to us both of the sweet love and magical enchantment we share as our hearts beat now as one in God’s grace forever. Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved – November 13, 2014 (Quintain)

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Date: 11/19/2014 5:07:00 AM
Silver treasuring thoughts I love you peachy beautiful dream gem/ Gary your poem / and liam you too/ honey and brew/you two Love. Take care XXXXX RAJAT
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/19/2014 6:47:00 AM
Rajat, Thanks my great friend. Glad you liked this one from Liam and me. The words do leave an enchanting message. Liam and I have another one under construction in addition to our upcoming solo writes individually. I will be by to see your latest works as well. All the Best!! Gary
Date: 11/16/2014 7:48:00 PM
A most beautiful collaboration between you and Liam, my dear friends. Very romantic piece! enjoyed reading it again! lol... Have a great week Gary and Liam! :) Definite a 7 for me! Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/17/2014 3:52:00 PM
"D" Thanks again so much!! I think both of us (and certainly I do) appreciate your read and visits to our poetry (both when we write together and when each of us write solo). I wanted you to know too that I happen to be a great admirer of your poetry as well. I know that you've been writing quite a while. Thanks for the "7." Keep Writing too!! Best!! Gary XOXO
Date: 11/16/2014 12:04:00 PM
reading this really our combination of feelings gary and emotions sparked this piece and reading all the wonderful comments thank you all for your heartfelt beautiful words and have a blessed beautiful sunday
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/16/2014 12:14:00 PM
Amen Liam!! This turned out to be a most blessed and wonderful write. The Leprechaun Chorus is singing most loudly and smiling with this one!! Best Always Mate, Gary
Date: 11/15/2014 8:52:00 PM
Wow Gary, I need to stop by here more often, keep writing
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2014 8:56:00 PM
Jerry, Thanks!! I also need to drop by to visit your poems too!! I certainly have not forgotten you either. As our network of contacts and colleagues expands it's much work keeping up with everyone -- let alone just writing. Best Always!! Gary (P.S. Keep Writing as well!!)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2014 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Greg!! I guess our names are so similar. At the end of the day, it's all good!! Best Wishes and say "Hi" to Kansas for me. Cheers, Gary
Date: 11/15/2014 8:25:00 PM
Why did you stop -- more!! Well done my friend -- craftsmanship!!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2014 8:59:00 PM
More is definitely on the way David. In fact, Liam and I are working on a co-write now for release this next week, in addition to our respective individuals projects as well. Best Always, Gary
Date: 11/15/2014 7:37:00 PM
you sweeten love's pot as words carry the depth of your emotion through your artpiece. Very well crafted, greg...huggs
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2014 9:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette!! Glad you like this co-write effort from Liam and me. Best Always, Gary

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