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On Lilac Breeze

Eggs Laid on Milkweed leaves, Caterpillars Soon emerge and weave Through the plant as they feast Then cocoon, a week at least On a warm spring day, when it's right A butterfly takes its maiden flight ~ Upon monarch's wings and morning dew A summer day has come to you Scent of rose on lilac breeze Wafts gently through the trees Butterflies float by 'Neath azure sky As birds sing Their sweet Song 12-13-2020 Double Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/5/2021 7:43:00 AM

So very beautiful Joseph. I hope to see a real Monarch butterfly one day :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2020 12:53:00 PM

a belated congrats here. Gosh, i have been so busy, even on my break!!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/24/2020 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this delightful Double Nonet Joseph, Hope you have a peaceful, loving Christmas Day tomorrow. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2020 3:23:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats ... Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/21/2020 7:33:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/21/2020 6:39:00 PM

Nicely done! Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Joseph, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/21/2020 10:43:00 AM

Now you have me dreaming of spring, Joseph. This is a beautifully penned nonet. Best wishes for a win in William's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/16/2020 9:18:00 AM

your beautiful nonet makes me long for spring dear Joseph, I pray it arrives soon enough, Merry Christmas xo

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/15/2020 3:19:00 PM

WoW! Joseph, This is just lovely. I could just picture the new creature emerging from its old home. I enjoyed such a beautiful sight. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the remainder of your day:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/15/2020 12:54:00 PM

Wow, this is so nice. A FAV for me. I like the butterfly takes its maiden flight and...upon monarch's wings and morning dew! :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/14/2020 9:58:00 PM

Oh my but I’m sniffing the air for such scent only spring can bring... Beautiful imagery, and your background photo is breathtaking:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2020 10:18:00 AM

you created a real beauty with this form. I really enjoy double nonets and etherees as well.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/13/2020 8:08:00 PM

"On a warm spring day, when it's right, a butterfly takes its maiden flight" Such a beautiful image. I love watching as butterflies flutter about. Your thoughts lift my heart. I feel like I am floating. :) Brandy