for Hilo Poet's Contrast Poetry Contest
It tried to pattern my poem's form after Robert Frost's, 'The Road Not Taken'.
I left my state to study afar. A church college lured me to go west where it’s so dry and no fireflies are. But I was young and followed no star that could lead me to what would be best. I left with no really firm goal. A psychology major I’d thought to pursue. My apathetic soul got off that bus. A different role I took when a new bus I caught! Off this new bus, I found myself flung onto a path I had never thought of - to ESL teaching I then swung. Also I fell into marriage quite young and always lived far from kinfolk I love. What if I had never moved away? Was my aimlessness part of my fate? Would I be happier living today where all through my youth I used to play? One can’t know what one can’t recreate.
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